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E. Don Harpe
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Age : 78
Location : Florida

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PostSubject: THE FAST LIFE   THE FAST LIFE EmptyThu Jun 25, 2009 10:20 am

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alj
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Age : 76
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PostSubject: Re: THE FAST LIFE   THE FAST LIFE EmptyThu Jun 25, 2009 10:48 am

OK, so far, E. Don, this is my favorite of the lyrics you've posted. the repetition of the word "fast," in all the forms it defines a life, I like the metaphors,"Ridin the rainbow and ropin the wind," and the way they lead into the Humpty Dumpty image - that's my favorite stanza. I can hear you singing it. Well done.

Ann
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Carol Troestler
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PostSubject: Re: THE FAST LIFE   THE FAST LIFE EmptyThu Jun 25, 2009 11:41 am

I agree, Ann. It is my favorite and something many can relate to besides fast cars, horses and women or men.
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Dick Stodghill
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PostSubject: Re: THE FAST LIFE   THE FAST LIFE EmptyThu Jun 25, 2009 3:23 pm

Shades of Kipling and Service. You're in fast company, Don.
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RunsWithScissors
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PostSubject: Re: THE FAST LIFE   THE FAST LIFE EmptyThu Jun 25, 2009 4:12 pm

Great rhythm and rhyme, Don. I was tapping my toe and singing the lyrics in my head.
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