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Dick Stodghill Five Star Member
Number of posts : 3795 Registration date : 2008-05-04 Age : 98 Location : Akron, Ohio
| Subject: A complete story in six words Wed Jun 11, 2008 5:18 am | |
| A few months ago there was a discussion on Criminal Brief (a great site for short story writers) about Hemingway's claim that he could write a complete story in six words. When challenged to do so he wrote:
For Sale: Baby shoes. Never used.
Some people thought it was a complete story, others did not and felt more needed to be said. In my opinion, adding anything more would destroy the purpose of making the reader create a picture in his mind. The poignancy would be lost. It would be possible, of course, to write a detailed account of the events leading up to the placing of the ad, but I feel Hemingway did it best. What do you think? Could you write a better story in six words? |
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JoElle Five Star Member
Number of posts : 1311 Registration date : 2008-05-09
| Subject: Re: A complete story in six words Wed Jun 11, 2008 5:38 am | |
| I think Hemingway created a thought that allowed someone to come up with their own story.
In school we were told our papers should answer those who, why, what, where, when, how questions.
For Sale. Baby shoes. Never used. Doesn't answer any questions except for what.
It leaves a lot unsaid and allows people to jump to conclusions. Perhaps the wrong one.
It does open the imagination and allows the reader to guess why they are for sale. But it isn't really a story.
It is more of a springboard.
It could be someone bought them as a gift. Maybe the shoes are pink and the lucky couple had a boy. Maybe a couple received too many pairs of shoes at the baby shower and the kid just never wore them. Maybe an enterprising person bought 30 pairs of babyshoes on clearance and is now selling them on Ebay to make a profit. It could be something more tragic, the shoes were bought for a baby who never came or didn't survive.
Mr. Julius managed to say quite a bit with only three words: Veni, Vidi, Vici |
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Shelagh Admin
Number of posts : 12662 Registration date : 2008-01-11 Location : UK
| Subject: Re: A complete story in six words Wed Jun 11, 2008 5:50 am | |
| That's three Latin words (six English words). I'll try five (not as good as Hemmingway or Caesar): Woman found dead. Husband missing. |
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pol mcshane Three Star Member
Number of posts : 112 Registration date : 2008-02-04 Location : Texas
| Subject: A complete story in six words Wed Jun 11, 2008 6:32 am | |
| I totally think those six words tell a story, Dick. As soon as I read them, I said to myself, "Aw", because the image that popped into my mind was that a couple was expecting a baby, and for some reason it died. Of course you don't know why or aything like that, but it is only six words. It worked for me. |
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Malcolm Five Star Member
Number of posts : 1504 Registration date : 2008-01-11 Location : Georgia
| Subject: Re: A complete story in six words Wed Jun 11, 2008 7:16 am | |
| Smith magazine has really been cleaning up with this concept now that they've published a book with readers' contributions.
Malcolm |
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Pam Five Star Member
Number of posts : 1790 Registration date : 2008-02-01 Age : 58 Location : Edmonton, Alberta, Canada
| Subject: Re: A complete story in six words Wed Jun 11, 2008 7:37 am | |
| I think it is a short story. It is intriguiing and can be read in one sitting. It would be an adequate springboard into a longer story, sure, but actually has the ability to capture the interest of a reader. Could I write a better story in six words? Yes, I could write a better story in six words. Would I? Probably not, since so much of what I do is paid by the word... I did actually take a couple of cracks at this, but couldn't get below nine words without sounding like a commercial. |
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zadaconnaway Five Star Member
Number of posts : 4017 Registration date : 2008-01-16 Age : 76 Location : Washington, USA
| Subject: Re: A complete story in six words Wed Jun 11, 2008 7:47 am | |
| I just got up, haven't had my coffee yet, and you want to put my mind to work! So no, I could not do any better, in fact, could not even match it. |
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lin Five Star Member
Number of posts : 2753 Registration date : 2008-03-20 Location : Mexico
| Subject: Re: A complete story in six words Wed Jun 11, 2008 8:47 am | |
| Spouse sought. No losers. |
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zadaconnaway Five Star Member
Number of posts : 4017 Registration date : 2008-01-16 Age : 76 Location : Washington, USA
| Subject: Re: A complete story in six words Wed Jun 11, 2008 9:05 am | |
| Good one lin, but how many spouses does one need? |
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P. Gordon Kennedy Five Star Member
Number of posts : 1076 Registration date : 2008-01-13 Age : 35 Location : Crystal Falls, Michigan
| Subject: Re: A complete story in six words Wed Jun 11, 2008 3:57 pm | |
| How about a four word story? The gun shoots....Bang! Well, anyway, that's the shortest story I can come up with. |
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Abe F. March Five Star Member
Number of posts : 10768 Registration date : 2008-01-26 Age : 85 Location : Germany
| Subject: Re: A complete story in six words Thu Jun 12, 2008 5:22 am | |
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Pam Five Star Member
Number of posts : 1790 Registration date : 2008-02-01 Age : 58 Location : Edmonton, Alberta, Canada
| Subject: Re: A complete story in six words Thu Jun 12, 2008 5:31 am | |
| Life is a journey we celebrated. |
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zadaconnaway Five Star Member
Number of posts : 4017 Registration date : 2008-01-16 Age : 76 Location : Washington, USA
| Subject: Re: A complete story in six words Thu Jun 12, 2008 6:16 am | |
| He lied, she cried, they wed. |
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Shelagh Admin
Number of posts : 12662 Registration date : 2008-01-11 Location : UK
| Subject: Re: A complete story in six words Thu Jun 12, 2008 6:25 am | |
| Octogenarian millionaire dies; young wife celebrates. |
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zadaconnaway Five Star Member
Number of posts : 4017 Registration date : 2008-01-16 Age : 76 Location : Washington, USA
| Subject: Re: A complete story in six words Thu Jun 12, 2008 7:43 am | |
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Abe F. March Five Star Member
Number of posts : 10768 Registration date : 2008-01-26 Age : 85 Location : Germany
| Subject: Re: A complete story in six words Thu Jun 12, 2008 7:46 am | |
| Sex. |
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