A formula for writing short stories

I keep running across stuff concerning that great pulp writer Lester Dent. Here is a line from his formula for writing 6,000 words stories that sell:

THE SECRET OF ALL WRITING IS TO MAKE EVERY WORD COUNT.

Oh, what the heck, here is his entire formula. I was surprised after reading it to see that it is quite similar to the way I have always written short stories:

LESTER DENT'S FORMULA FOR WRITING SHORT FICTION
This is a formula, a master plot, for any 6000 word pulp story. It has
worked on adventure, detective, western and war-air. It tells exactly
where to put everything. It shows definitely just what must happen in
each successive thousand words.

No yarn of mine written to the formula has yet failed to sell.

The business of building stories seems not much different from the
business of building anything else.

Here's how it starts:

1. A DIFFERENT MURDER METHOD FOR VILLAIN TO USE
2. A DIFFERENT THING FOR VILLAIN TO BE SEEKING
3. A DIFFERENT LOCALE
4. A MENACE WHICH IS TO HANG LIKE A CLOUD OVER HERO

One of these DIFFERENT things would be nice, two better, three swell. It
may help if they are fully in mind before tackling the rest.

A different murder method could be--different. Thinking of shooting,
knifing, hydrocyanic, garroting, poison needles, scorpions, a few others,
and writing them on paper gets them where they may suggest something.
Scorpions and their poison bite? Maybe mosquitos or flies treated with
deadly germs?

If the victims are killed by ordinary methods, but found under strange
and identical circumstances each time, it might serve, the reader of
course not knowing until the end, that the method of murder is ordinary.
Scribes who have their villain's victims found with butterflies, spiders
or bats stamped on them could conceivably be flirting with this gag.

Probably it won't do a lot of good to be too odd, fanciful or grotesque
with murder methods.

The different thing for the villain to be after might be something other
than jewels, the stolen bank loot, the pearls, or some other old ones.

Here, again one might get too bizarre.

Unique locale? Easy. Selecting one that fits in with the murder method
and the treasure--thing that villain wants--makes it simpler, and it's
also nice to use a familiar one, a place where you've lived or worked. So
many pulpateers don't. It sometimes saves embarrassment to know nearly as
much about the locale as the editor, or enough to fool him.

Here's a nifty much used in faking local color. For a story laid in
Egypt, say, author finds a book titled "Conversational Egyptian Easily
Learned," or something like that. He wants a character to ask in
Egyptian, "What's the matter?" He looks in the book and finds, "El
khabar, eyh?" To keep the reader from getting dizzy, it's perhaps wise to
make it clear in some fashion, just what that means. Occasionally the
text will tell this, or someone can repeat it in English. But it's a
doubtful move to stop and tell the reader in so many words the English
translation.

The writer learns they have palm trees in Egypt. He looks in the book,
finds the Egyptian for palm trees, and uses that. This kids editors and
readers into thinking he knows something about Egypt.

Here's the second installment of the master plot.

Divide the 6000 word yarn into four 1500 word parts. In each 1500 word
part, put the following:


FIRST 1500 WORDS

1--First line, or as near thereto as possible, introduce the hero and
swat him with a fistful of trouble. Hint at a mystery, a menace or a
problem to be solved--something the hero has to cope with.

2--The hero pitches in to cope with his fistful of trouble. (He tries to
fathom the mystery, defeat the menace, or solve the problem.)

3--Introduce ALL the other characters as soon as possible. Bring them on
in action.

4--Hero's endevours land him in an actual physical conflict near the end
of the first 1500 words.

5--Near the end of first 1500 words, there is a complete surprise twist in
the plot development.

SO FAR: Does it have SUSPENSE?
Is there a MENACE to the hero?
Does everything happen logically?

At this point, it might help to recall that action should do something
besides advance the hero over the scenery. Suppose the hero has learned
the dastards of villains have seized somebody named Eloise, who can
explain the secret of what is behind all these sinister events. The hero
corners villains, they fight, and villains get away. Not so hot.

Hero should accomplish something with his tearing around, if only to
rescue Eloise, and surprise! Eloise is a ring-tailed monkey. The hero
counts the rings on Eloise's tail, if nothing better comes to mind.
They're not real. The rings are painted there. Why?


SECOND 1500 WORDS

1--Shovel more grief onto the hero.

2--Hero, being heroic, struggles, and his struggles lead up to:

3--Another physical conflict.

4--A surprising plot twist to end the 1500 words.

NOW: Does second part have SUSPENSE?
Does the MENACE grow like a black cloud?
Is the hero getting it in the neck?
Is the second part logical?

DON'T TELL ABOUT IT***Show how the thing looked. This is one of the
secrets of writing; never tell the reader--show him. (He trembles,
roving eyes, slackened jaw, and such.) MAKE THE READER SEE HIM.

When writing, it helps to get at least one minor surprise to the printed
page. It is reasonable to to expect these minor surprises to sort of
inveigle the reader into keeping on. They need not be such profound
efforts. One method of accomplishing one now and then is to be gently
misleading. Hero is examining the murder room. The door behind him begins
slowly to open. He does not see it. He conducts his examination
blissfully. Door eases open, wider and wider, until--surprise! The glass
pane falls out of the big window across the room. It must have fallen
slowly, and air blowing into the room caused the door to open. Then what
the heck made the pane fall so slowly? More mystery.

Characterizing a story actor consists of giving him some things
which make him stick in the reader's mind. TAG HIM.

BUILD YOUR PLOTS SO THAT ACTION CAN BE CONTINUOUS.


THIRD 1500 WORDS

1--Shovel the grief onto the hero.

2--Hero makes some headway, and corners the villain or somebody in:

3--A physical conflict.

4--A surprising plot twist, in which the hero preferably gets it in the
neck bad, to end the 1500 words.

DOES: It still have SUSPENSE?
The MENACE getting blacker?
The hero finds himself in a hell of a fix?
It all happens logically?

These outlines or master formulas are only something to make you certain of
inserting some physical conflict, and some genuine plot twists, with a little
suspense and menace thrown in. Without them, there is no pulp story.

These physical conflicts in each part might be DIFFERENT, too. If one
fight is with fists, that can take care of the pugilism until next the
next yarn. Same for poison gas and swords. There may, naturally, be
exceptions. A hero with a peculiar punch, or a quick draw, might use it
more than once.

The idea is to avoid monotony.

ACTION:
Vivid, swift, no words wasted. Create suspense, make the reader see and
feel the action.

ATMOSPHERE:
Hear, smell, see, feel and taste.

DESCRIPTION:
Trees, wind, scenery and water.

THE SECRET OF ALL WRITING IS TO MAKE EVERY WORD COUNT.


FOURTH 1500 WORDS

1--Shovel the difficulties more thickly upon the hero.

2--Get the hero almost buried in his troubles. (Figuratively, the villain
has him prisoner and has him framed for a murder rap; the girl is
presumably dead, everything is lost, and the DIFFERENT murder method is
about to dispose of the suffering protagonist.)

3--The hero extricates himself using HIS OWN SKILL, training or brawn.

4--The mysteries remaining--one big one held over to this point will help
grip interest--are cleared up in course of final conflict as hero takes
the situation in hand.

5--Final twist, a big surprise, (This can be the villain turning out to be
the unexpected person, having the "Treasure" be a dud, etc.)

6--The snapper, the punch line to end it.

HAS: The SUSPENSE held out to the last line?
The MENACE held out to the last?
Everything been explained?
It all happen logically?
Is the Punch Line enough to leave the reader with that WARM FEELING?
Did God kill the villain? Or the hero?

Thanks Dick, I printed it out and tacked it to the wall next to my computer.

Well, that formula ought to work just fine. Makes me want to start out a story sort of like this:

Bart Smith woke up with a hangover covered with scorpions and handcuffed to the body of exotic dancer Shu Shu Morris. Under better circumstances, he would have complimented her on her silver Santa Fe fan and turquoise stockings.

Malcolm

Malcolm, that's a beautiful start to your short story.
For some weird reason, and this is really weird... I imagined the scorpions to be black scorpions!

Dear Dick,
I printed it, too. Some posts help clear out the confusion a whole lot more than others and this is one of those post. It gives me the courage to try again, something new. Well, something old, too.

Ahad, the scorpions in Florida are small, but I remember the ones in Arizona. They used to encase them in a big acrylic blob for paper weights. I have not seen a black one. So, I think the scorpions in Malcolm's story would be black, just to add to the uniqueness.



Love,
Betty

It worked well for Dent. I just called him up on Amazon and decades after his death he has 427 lisitngs. That formula I posted is all over the Internet but is being sold on Kindle for $3.99. Dent was a production machine. His best known stuff was the Doc Savage series but like many of his contemporaries he wrote in many genres in order to earn a living during the Great Depression.

Malcolm wrote:

Well, that formula ought to work just fine. Makes me want to start out a story sort of like this:

Bart Smith woke up with a hangover covered with scorpions and handcuffed to the body of exotic dancer Shu Shu Morris. Under better circumstances, he would have complimented her on her silver Santa Fe fan and turquoise stockings.

Malcolm

Great opening, Malcolm!!!

Thanks Dick.

I have been thinking about a different murder weapon for the murderer to use. Of course my devious mind goes into nature. I was thinking about the many, many, many fire ant hills in florida. I wondered if a person with a small bob cat tractor could be going around and scooping out fire ant hills, complete, queen and all, and populating a five acre parcel so that it was fire ants dens fence post to fence post. A decent distance between mounds so they did not assinate each other, but so that no one could walk the whole five acres without being poisoned by formic acid.

What do you think, Dick. Would it work?

Love,
Betty

I was given the following formula:

All is well. Something goes wrong. Others become involved. Enter the hero. Surprise twist amazes all. Pieces fall in place. Happy ending.

I forgot, there are two endings: happy for now and happy ever after.

Thanks Dick!

Betty, you have a very devious mind! I wouldn't want to wander onto that five acres bymistake!

I don't know if it would work or not, Betty. A forensic scientist or pathologist could tell you. No doubt being in the middle of it could drive a person nuts.

I can't recall ever reading a book of fiction that didn't have a happy ending - that the hero or heroine came out on top in some fashion.
Non-fiction doesn't always end the way we would like, but then that's the real world.
Of course, I haven't read every book written, but I'm working on it.