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 The Secret of Sentarra: The Calling

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PostSubject: The Secret of Sentarra: The Calling   The Secret of Sentarra: The Calling EmptyTue Feb 15, 2011 6:10 pm

Fate has promised to make him king, but at what cost?
Since he was a child, he has held two identities: One as Tehveor, the abused nephew of the tyrannical king of Eirlerre. The other as Celestion, the prophesied king of a secret country called "Sentarra." Fate has promised to ensure that he becomes king, if Tehveor is willing to piece together and obey the clues that legend has left. He cannot lead two lives forever. And Fate can be a hard master. It will destroy everything to make him king - including his family, his identity and perhaps Eirlerre itself. Can Tehveor raise one kingdom without destroying another?

http://www.secretofsentarra.com/p/chapter-one.html

P.S. Please note, some servers may be a bit slow to load the page.


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PostSubject: Re: The Secret of Sentarra: The Calling   The Secret of Sentarra: The Calling EmptyWed Feb 16, 2011 9:14 am

I wanted to read, but itwas to dark. Can you fix it?
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PostSubject: Re: The Secret of Sentarra: The Calling   The Secret of Sentarra: The Calling EmptyWed Feb 16, 2011 9:21 am

It was too dark? Did you wait for the page to finish loading? There should be a light brown background/parchment.
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PostSubject: Re: The Secret of Sentarra: The Calling   The Secret of Sentarra: The Calling EmptyWed Feb 16, 2011 1:12 pm

Way too dark.
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PostSubject: Re: The Secret of Sentarra: The Calling   The Secret of Sentarra: The Calling EmptyWed Feb 16, 2011 2:41 pm

Hmm. That's strange. I'll see what I can do... can you tell me if it's a black screen you're seeing or a brown one?
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PostSubject: Re: The Secret of Sentarra: The Calling   The Secret of Sentarra: The Calling EmptyWed Feb 16, 2011 3:03 pm

It takes about 30 secs for the whole page to download -- some people won't wait that long.

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PostSubject: Re: The Secret of Sentarra: The Calling   The Secret of Sentarra: The Calling EmptyWed Feb 16, 2011 3:15 pm

Hmmm. Thanks for telling me. I'll have to talk to my web designer about that. I can't fix it on my own.
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PostSubject: Re: The Secret of Sentarra: The Calling   The Secret of Sentarra: The Calling EmptyWed Feb 16, 2011 4:42 pm

It's brown with dark lettering and a dark tint. Very hard to read.
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PostSubject: Re: The Secret of Sentarra: The Calling   The Secret of Sentarra: The Calling EmptyWed Feb 16, 2011 7:11 pm

I'll see if I can get them to lighten the parchment. The only thing I can do right now is make the text a light color but that might make it even harder to read...
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