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PostSubject: WITHOUT POETRY   WITHOUT POETRY EmptyFri Oct 30, 2009 8:59 am

Without the lyrical expression of words
Without the rhythm of beats
Without the flow of each stanza read
What a dispassionate world this would be

Without the sun that brightens the sky
Without a robin or dove
Without the knowledge of the birds and the bees
How would we learn to love

Without the child with a smile on his face
When read stories by Dr. Seuss
Without a pail of water
Jack and Jill would not have known Mother Goose

Without a melody inspired by life
Without a tune to hum along
Without the words to a musical note
This world would be without so
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Carol Troestler
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Registration date : 2008-06-07
Age : 86
Location : Wisconsin

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PostSubject: Re: WITHOUT POETRY   WITHOUT POETRY EmptyFri Oct 30, 2009 3:36 pm

My sister-in-law put the following on facebook:

God is a DJ.
Life is a dance floor.
Love is the rhythm.
You are the music.

I love the life is a dance floor part. Life is so much music.

Love your poem.

Carol
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jjbreunig3
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Age : 65
Location : Lyman, Maine, USA

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PostSubject: Re: WITHOUT POETRY   WITHOUT POETRY EmptyMon Dec 14, 2009 6:49 am

A delightful piece; loved the message and the joy it conveys; my only suggestion would be to use punctuation - the reader should not have to guess the flow and pauses within the melody of your words; proper grammar strengthens one's writing and meaning; Happy Holidays! --Joe
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