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E. Don Harpe
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PostSubject: SHE TOUCHES ME   SHE TOUCHES ME EmptyMon Mar 30, 2009 9:00 am

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dkchristi
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PostSubject: Re: SHE TOUCHES ME   SHE TOUCHES ME EmptyMon Mar 30, 2009 3:54 pm

Wow! How about substituting "he." Was this picked up by a singer of reknown? I could see a duet, he and she.
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E. Don Harpe
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PostSubject: Re: SHE TOUCHES ME   SHE TOUCHES ME EmptyMon Mar 30, 2009 4:00 pm

Well, DK, you're right of course in that it was written as a song, but no, it wasn't ever picked up. I have thought it was good enough, but never got any bites, and as we're not in the business any longer, I doubt that it will ever be recorded. Thanks for reading it and commenting though, I appreciate it. And I too think it would be a great duet.
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PostSubject: Re: SHE TOUCHES ME   SHE TOUCHES ME EmptyMon Mar 30, 2009 4:48 pm

Can't you keep trying to get it picked up?
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RunsWithScissors
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PostSubject: Re: SHE TOUCHES ME   SHE TOUCHES ME EmptyMon Mar 30, 2009 8:08 pm

Tender and heart-felt. Truly lovely.
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PostSubject: Re: SHE TOUCHES ME   SHE TOUCHES ME EmptyMon Mar 30, 2009 9:07 pm

Wow, Don. The poet within shines bright. That is touching, and I think it would make a great duet, too.
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PostSubject: Re: SHE TOUCHES ME   SHE TOUCHES ME EmptyThu Apr 02, 2009 11:45 pm

I think if you did change "she" to "He" you may be able to get a country/gospel group interested in it. The words are wonderful and the meter would easily lend itself to just about any time signature. Don't give up on it, it is worthy of being heard!!!!
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