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PostSubject: Gargoyle   Mon Sep 10, 2018 6:31 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Gargoyle   Wed Sep 12, 2018 1:06 am

Interesting review.  The problem seems to with the use of grammar.
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PostSubject: Re: Gargoyle   Wed Sep 12, 2018 3:09 am

That's been the case with several recent books I've read for review. The author relies on 'ly' and 'ing' words to carry the scene and all it does is bog down the writing.
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